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Agh! The NG preloader again! So overused. Thermite automatically = fun, duh. Alright... loading. Loading. Loading. I'm on broadband, and it hasn't moved a bit. Ah, here we go, maybe. Woo! A disclaimer! Kick ass! Thermite needs a disclaimer! Wait... is this Ramzi? Wow! What is Thermit? = very informative! I mean, VERY INFORMATIVE! I never took chemistry, but your explanation makes sense! I also like how you dispelled myths about thermite... This is shaping up to be a good entry! Alright... How do I use Thermite is pretty cool, too. I like this! Educational... but is it destructive, as well? I like how you explain a propane torch. Very safety oriented... I like that! Not a lot of NG people going "Teh Th3rm1t3 kicz asszz!!!1111!!! L3ts blow sh1t up!!!1 W00t!!1" Like the safety movie! Once again, VERY comprehensive! I was too lazy to read the "Can I make my own" section, but it looked informative, too. Alright, watching movie. Like the music. Quality is sort of low, but it gets better after materials. Like how you showed the construction process, as well as the walkaround. Alright! Let's Go! HOLY COOL! Didn't make it very far, but hey... Alright, slo-mo! Looks like it about made it to the sound card. Status, damaged, eh? Woot.. molten glass... This is awesome! I give it a 5 for the amount of work and information put in. Very informative and cool!
Author's Response:
Reviewing as you watch...I'll have to try that sometime...not a bad idea. Thanks for appreciating the informativeness of it (and yes, I know the preloader is overused) but I'm glad you liked it. I did put quite a bit of work into tweaking the video and researching some of the stuff about it. Thanks for reviewing!
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Liking the preloader. Alright, let's see it! I have high hopes, this looks good. Nice music. Nice music! Still nice music! He's got some moves! AND FILLED IN! EVEN BETTER! THIS IS AWESOME!! Coulda been longer, but I'll take what I can get! W00t! All my 5 R Belong To This! To the review from can_it_da... Dude, open your mind. Just because you don't like cheerleading doesn't mean you should just pan this. I mean, that's lazy. All 0s? If you'd looked at this objectively for even ONE SECOND you'd have seen that it at least gets some points for sound, or at the very least, the graphics at the ending. Look at this for what it is, don't see what you want in it. If the bunny had pompoms, then yeah, I could see cheerleading. You just heard the music probably and said "Oh, cheerleaders. You suck." The bunneh was breakin, anyway. Oh well, that's life, and that's people... Nice Flash! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for your detailed review, very appreciative that you took the time to give me some feedback, as for pretty much everyone else who's reviewed so far. Yeah, can_it_da needs a javalin through his chest...... Thanks again!
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Here we go! A forum.. most be the place where your "different styles of animators" came from. Alright, play. Liking the sound! Hard to see Bring it On. Heh, I like this! This is awesome! Well made, for the most part... Some could use some work, but meh. It's good enough. Heh, like the touch from the Forum part. What's the cart say, I can't see it. Yup, that's Setzer, lol. This was nice! Some of the scenes could use work, but overall it kicks ass! You get a 4! Make it better and all my 5 are belong to you!
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Well, I never saw the first one, but here goes. This is pretty ok... Could look better, but... I'll not complain yet. A little more action would be nice.. This scene is too long... Is there another? It's a good song, but it's just boring... Nothing going on, really. Sorry, but if this is it, then it sucks. Work on it. Make the video part longer/better/more exciting. Right now, it's just a stupid loop. Add more, don't just resort to looping something that needs more work!
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Loading screen at least isn't NG screen... Doesn't look very good... But it goes well with the music... And it almost tells a story. Aww, poor bunny, it's Easter! HEHE! The egg thing looks really bad. Wow, this surprisingly tells a nice story! It needs work on how it looks, but overall really nice. I give it a 2. Hmm.. Replay plus is nice, and it's a reward for the watcher, always a good thing. Liking the music. What's with this "different name" thing? I can't click on it or anything, it's just there. Whatever. The replay plus thing bumps you up to a 3. Nice work!
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But it could be better. It's nice, but it gets boring after a few minutes.. Maybe the addition of levels or weapons, or a significance behind the rings? (Collect rings to allow your base to heal you, instead of slowly recharging it's healing capacity?) Good showing overall, solid 4.
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This is really nice! I love the music, the animation is smooth, and the action in whole is awesome! You guys make a nice team! Great job!
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And... Go. Liking the music.. Wha? Reading? Like I can read? Ok, ok... let's see... Hey, I wasn't done! Dude, too much story, man.. You should introduce it a different way, and make it easier to understand. Also, work on your grammar. Spelling's not horrible, yet. This is pretty boring. For a fight scene, nothing really cool happening. Nice effects there, but still boring. It looks nice, but that's about it. Work on it... Hope episode 2 makes more sense.
Author's Response:
I will try harder on the second one. I only try to improve. I'll also make longer fighting scenes and more elaborate storylines using actual characters instead of just text.
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God, not the NG load again... too overused! Art's not so good. Sound not so good. Story not so good. Funny, though. LOL! "See what happens when you argue with the DM?" Man, that's typical. 45 mins later... XD Yay for fire! What's with the rainbow around the "oh yeah". BBoDC, eh? Play nice music here, for sleepage... L00t4ge! Meh.. would have been a little better if they had fought the big guy... Whatever.. You get a 2!
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So far so good.. Nice story, like the scenes of Mario and Yoshi... Hey! That's the Yoshi's Island 2 map theme! W00t! Alright... Scene: 1 go! Hmm.. would have been cool if you had the egg shoot thing... Ooh... this is Mario the forest of illusion theme.. Heh, that was pretty funny. Alright, scene 2. Ooh.. still lovin the music. Wahaha... that was nice. Alright, scene 3. Hmm... Sound took a dive... want music! Alright, better... Ooh... fight scene? Poor Yoshi! Question mark? LOL! That's awesome! Wait.. what is he, Mega Man? LOL... heheh... Now what? Ouches! Hehe! Yoshi's buddies! Again, with the good music! Wahahah! Luigi! Guess this is the end... Maybe a secret extra scene would have been nice... And you know that Luigi would have just thanked Yoshi. Good flash overall!
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